This all sounds the same. Your not saying anything new.
You got to use better rhymes.......
yea the story is good, and your flow isnt bad.....
the lyrics need improvement.
This all sounds the same. Your not saying anything new.
You got to use better rhymes.......
yea the story is good, and your flow isnt bad.....
the lyrics need improvement.
Am I being trolled? I'm VERY good at taking criticism....but this comment makes no sense o_O.
Well um, this is well over a year old, listen to my new stuff at:
www.youtube.com/augustineaudio
www.twitter.com/callmeaugustine
www.soundcloud.com/augustineaudio
This is....
Good Yo maybe we could colab someday.
Everythign just sounds Together and nothing over powers anything
Keep it up.
ThankYou ...
I Would Luv To Work With You ...
I Will PM You ...
If people think this is good.
Then i question the newgounds people
Your voice doesnt fit.
The autotune Doesnt work at allllllllllll
Sorry usually give a good review but this sucks
alright thanks for the review i see what you mean if it helps like i said it was a freestyle
Good
I like this, it has the snister" imma fuck yo day up son" feel......hhaha i dotn talk like that but you get the point......
Keep it up
"you can only get better"
Check out my new song
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/352023
much appreciated, tight song too my man
Its all the same
Its good but gets boring WAYY to fast.......
Add more instruments and stuff.
Make it a work of art. That you create.
THX >>>
one thing i noticed
there's to much distortion
Tone it down a bit.
Mess around witht he different types of things...
"You can only get better"
yea, i know.. it's a little fuzzy i'm gonna keep re-recording pieces and mess around with different sounds until i get the right sound.
thanks for being honest though.
Not bad, BUT
Its way to generic. It Sounds like EVERYTHING else OUT THERE
But if thats what you like to do, Keep doing , dont let anyone stop you from what you do....
thanks man. u could have gotten it a 7 lol na just playin
God Bless
Your like
the next "el-p" (look that name up)
he samples beats and makes a masterpiece. haha wasnt suppose to rhyme.
But yea just keep doing what you do.
youll just keep getting better.
Thanks for the review...
Eh ill wait for another version
The only part thats good is the intro
Once the beta kicks in. Weres the Element to the song?
its just turns into the same annoying sound
Try to actually take the time next time, and dont get bored and just loop the beat.
Keep trying though its not bad, you can just tell you didnt try.
yeah i know people tell me the same in messages but as for the trying thing, this is the first time i made a beat that involed piece's of a song, if i didn't really try it wouldn't be up here but Seriously Thanks
oh and read the Describtion SomeTime, I said I really liked this one. So I Obviously Tryed.
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