EHH
Good job
but doesnt deliver the feeling that you get when a girl leaves you and she had your heart.
Why be sad. when you can get the pain out.
all these "love" songs sound the same.
someone needs to make a "fuck you" song
t their ex.
EHH
Good job
but doesnt deliver the feeling that you get when a girl leaves you and she had your heart.
Why be sad. when you can get the pain out.
all these "love" songs sound the same.
someone needs to make a "fuck you" song
t their ex.
We will keep that in mind
Am ix between
a busta rhymes and puffy/biggie beat.
not bad.
Could use a little more of a "real" sound.
maybe try to find real instruments.
You can do that using fl studio.
The have the best sampled instruments
im using Reason 4.0 :P thats some kind of free beat... usually i use "real" Instruments for serious Beats :)
but thanks for your feedback :)
This is just bad.
This story has been done before, OVER AND OVER.
your flow is alright. '
you sound alot like atmosphere
ALOT of people sound like atmosphere.
maybe its cause that poetry style rap.
Hey man, I love your latest single!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/329070
"Going through the factory at night
is kinda scary
there isnt really chocolate and candy
its kinda bloody
you should see the oompa loompas
there evil clowns
run around,duckin and hiding
trying to take me down
i dont see wonka, i dont think hes Gene Wilder
This place, isnt as i imagined, its mold colder
the trees are all decayed, rivers full of waste
what was once precious candy, now has a sour taste"
????
its simple.
Its been done before
Go down a different path.
But keep doing what you love
i made it to be a bass bangin type ludacris beat.
Not bat ,But
I was gonna write why i didnt like it
but upon listening to it, its no that bad.
Only thing is that the "bell" sound gets repetitive
Theres nothing new added to the beat.
lil wayne would prob rap to this, Oh wait hes in jail.
lol
By the way, in my opinion, Drake sucks. So does all of cash money.
they all sound the same
No im not gonna say eminem is better
Hes starting to even sound bad
If you wanna find a good rapper
Look up "El p"
and look up his song called " smithereens"
'
Never stop doing what you love
=D thanks
I present to you!!!!
the midi version of eminem
it is alright. could be better.
beat is good.
God I wish it was midi it would of made it so much easier...Thanks I'm going to get better somehow!
For all those who oppose
If someone comments this sayng " dont use the word juggalo"
think of this.
white people are crackers
black people use the n-word.
icp fans use juggalo......
Well that's Cid vorheez for ya.
Dude this is awesome
Good job
in the intro it was kinda dull
but keep it up
never stop doing what your doing
Thanks a lot man. I can understand how you might think the intro is dull. It's kind of slow and takes awhile to get going. Around :32 I could really understand where you're coming from, but I mostly just want the chance to go back and edit it and extend it. Make it a little less dull you know? :) Anyway, thanks for the review.
Good job
Sounds like it could be in a movie
just go for a little more of a better sound'
use reverb, delay, and stuff liek that.
Youll get it
Never stop doing what you love
Thanks for your review :D As a matter of fact, I used plenty of reverb effects... maybe they just need more strength? who knows xD I'm a newbie composer, I still got a lot to learn about mastering and stuff xD
And yeah, you got that right: I love doing these =)
WHAT?
IS it alright if i put a verse to this song.
Yeah, Sure. Just make sure I get credit on the beat.
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