HAHAHA

Finally some pure randomness
this is like evil dead good. haha
keep it up kid.

This all sounds the same. Your not saying anything new.

You got to use better rhymes.......

yea the story is good, and your flow isnt bad.....
the lyrics need improvement.

This isnt that good. Its just repetitive. Why cant dubstep producers put more effort into the song?

Its more like Hardstyle.

If your going to call it dubstep.......after so many tracks, you know everyones going to want better and bassier......pretty soon your going to be scrounging creativity from your brain just to make a decen sounding breakdown..........

Hmmmm

Its good, but you can tell your tying to hard. Plus you take A lot of lines from other people....

That whole enitire eminem "devil" line...
Add heart and youll be great......
One of the best things i could have leanred was this " Do what you know. Dont go trying to be something youe not"

Ok now to the chorus..... Sing it more .... put heart into it, and it would sound sick

Maybe we could colab one time......
Hit me up.......