This is just bad.
This story has been done before, OVER AND OVER.
your flow is alright. '
you sound alot like atmosphere
ALOT of people sound like atmosphere.
maybe its cause that poetry style rap.
This is just bad.
This story has been done before, OVER AND OVER.
your flow is alright. '
you sound alot like atmosphere
ALOT of people sound like atmosphere.
maybe its cause that poetry style rap.
Hey man, I love your latest single!
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/329070
"Going through the factory at night
is kinda scary
there isnt really chocolate and candy
its kinda bloody
you should see the oompa loompas
there evil clowns
run around,duckin and hiding
trying to take me down
i dont see wonka, i dont think hes Gene Wilder
This place, isnt as i imagined, its mold colder
the trees are all decayed, rivers full of waste
what was once precious candy, now has a sour taste"
????
its simple.
Its been done before
Go down a different path.
But keep doing what you love
i made it to be a bass bangin type ludacris beat.
EHH
This song Isnt bad
but its just like everyone else
You sound like OJ da juiceman
Allll your lyrics are others peoples lyrics.
heres a good line you would like for your next song" Im like pokemon i wanna pikachu, But your a bitch, when i speak to you"
I didnt vote. cause its not bad...soo keep doing what you do.
Bad editing
The sound Quality is bad!!
first rapper, is bad. he tries to sound like Kiss
it doesnt work.
Second dude. its been done before.
all the lyrics are simple
not really a message
just saying stupid nonsense.
But keep it up
never stop doing what you love
Not bat ,But
I was gonna write why i didnt like it
but upon listening to it, its no that bad.
Only thing is that the "bell" sound gets repetitive
Theres nothing new added to the beat.
lil wayne would prob rap to this, Oh wait hes in jail.
lol
By the way, in my opinion, Drake sucks. So does all of cash money.
they all sound the same
No im not gonna say eminem is better
Hes starting to even sound bad
If you wanna find a good rapper
Look up "El p"
and look up his song called " smithereens"
'
Never stop doing what you love
=D thanks
I present to you!!!!
the midi version of eminem
it is alright. could be better.
beat is good.
God I wish it was midi it would of made it so much easier...Thanks I'm going to get better somehow!
THIS.....
Beat doesnt fit. its tooo much.
but its not bad.
keep it up im looking to hear the final version
For all those who oppose
If someone comments this sayng " dont use the word juggalo"
think of this.
white people are crackers
black people use the n-word.
icp fans use juggalo......
Well that's Cid vorheez for ya.
Alright.
You guys need to find your "rap voice"
you sound like you have no heart.
monotone doesn't sell, unless it fits the beat.
keep trying
never stop doing what you love
The lyrics are simple
Dude this is awesome
Good job
in the intro it was kinda dull
but keep it up
never stop doing what your doing
Thanks a lot man. I can understand how you might think the intro is dull. It's kind of slow and takes awhile to get going. Around :32 I could really understand where you're coming from, but I mostly just want the chance to go back and edit it and extend it. Make it a little less dull you know? :) Anyway, thanks for the review.
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