This all sounds the same. Your not saying anything new.
You got to use better rhymes.......
yea the story is good, and your flow isnt bad.....
the lyrics need improvement.
Am I being trolled? I'm VERY good at taking criticism....but this comment makes no sense o_O.
Well um, this is well over a year old, listen to my new stuff at:
This isnt that good. Its just repetitive. Why cant dubstep producers put more effort into the song?
Its more like Hardstyle.
If your going to call it dubstep.......after so many tracks, you know everyones going to want better and bassier......pretty soon your going to be scrounging creativity from your brain just to make a decen sounding breakdown..........
Its good, but you can tell your tying to hard. Plus you take A lot of lines from other people....
That whole enitire eminem "devil" line...
Add heart and youll be great......
One of the best things i could have leanred was this " Do what you know. Dont go trying to be something youe not"
Ok now to the chorus..... Sing it more .... put heart into it, and it would sound sick
Maybe we could colab one time......
Hit me up.......
So many people think dark is Lowering the notes and having slow beats....
Dark is something you gotta have within you. IF you dont have that dark beats are hard to make.......
"Thats the true heart of someone with dark passion
Not some who does it for the fashion to fit in.
Ive been given that art, you really havent" -Me
You can only get better so keep trying.
Good Yo maybe we could colab someday.
Everythign just sounds Together and nothing over powers anything
Keep it up.
I Would Luv To Work With You ...
I Will PM You ...
If people think this is good.
Then i question the newgounds people
Your voice doesnt fit.
The autotune Doesnt work at allllllllllll
Sorry usually give a good review but this sucks
alright thanks for the review i see what you mean if it helps like i said it was a freestyle
I like this, it has the snister" imma fuck yo day up son" feel......hhaha i dotn talk like that but you get the point......
Keep it up
"you can only get better"
Check out my new song
much appreciated, tight song too my man
Its all the same
Its good but gets boring WAYY to fast.......
Add more instruments and stuff.
Make it a work of art. That you create.
one thing i noticed
there's to much distortion
Tone it down a bit.
Mess around witht he different types of things...
"You can only get better"
yea, i know.. it's a little fuzzy i'm gonna keep re-recording pieces and mess around with different sounds until i get the right sound.
thanks for being honest though.
1st guy sounds like
e-40. Exactly like 3-40.........Sooo yea. It Sucks.
Well... i dont know who that is. Does he rap about taking a shit? Thanx for the review!
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